Monday, September 1, 2008

"Petals of life"

I remember I remember
Those thunder nights
Sweet rose of lights
The first flower of love
You gave me up above
Then we separated
Our hearts erupted

Kept rose in reserve
Aroma of it to preserve
To remember you in pain
Precious moments to gain

Opened it here and there
Desire of happiness everywhere
Hope it doesn’t fade
Yes, exactly I afraid

Saw the petals to remember
From September to December
Hope you would again meet
That would be a blissful treat

Gone the aroma of love
Gone the color of dove
When I saw it said
How could you hide my head?
When I saw it said
How could you jail my aroma?
It was a sad trauma

Yes, I would bane you with this
You would never get that bliss
Yes, he would never meet
Yes, he would ever cheat

What was my mistake that you did?
What was my mistake that you cheat?

Searching life in wonder
Lurching with life that thunder
Yes, a time to blame my fate
Yes, it’s a time to Create
Thank you rose for the lesson
Thank you rose for this session!

5 comments:

Srinivasa said...

Beautiful Poem From a Beautiful person at Heart.

Chaioholic said...

Nice poem. Mind if i can pick a flaw. I guess its Create in the last para fourth line. But otherwise good really good....

Jayashree and Just Jay said...

Thank you, that just missed out of mind.

Chaioholic said...

Hey no probs. Thnx for comin on mine.I hv jus posted 8 posts in all till now.M sure the first four ones were the best so far.Do hv a look on them.U shud like them....

Chaioholic said...

A new one posted.Check it out .Wud be fun....