Is this a phase or the deepest ocean?
Drops of tear with deepest emotion
Lonely nights on terrace would make you cry
For wanting to meet someone after repeated try.
So many questions unanswered, undone
When really needed someone, but was none
Whom to drop a line to, whom to articulate on tear eyed
Life is definitely on a roller coaster ride.
Understanding the misinterpretation is a greatest pain
There’s complete darkness in the lane
Hoping to get rid of this everlasting strain
I promise that you will never complain.
Hope, folks understand that we are made for each other
All customs, all tradition are not dimensions of another
We respect ethnicity so we could be permitted
But not definitely our care for each other is omitted.
Drops of tear with deepest emotion
Lonely nights on terrace would make you cry
For wanting to meet someone after repeated try.
So many questions unanswered, undone
When really needed someone, but was none
Whom to drop a line to, whom to articulate on tear eyed
Life is definitely on a roller coaster ride.
Understanding the misinterpretation is a greatest pain
There’s complete darkness in the lane
Hoping to get rid of this everlasting strain
I promise that you will never complain.
Hope, folks understand that we are made for each other
All customs, all tradition are not dimensions of another
We respect ethnicity so we could be permitted
But not definitely our care for each other is omitted.
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13 comments:
Hi..
Very Nice Poem.
Keep smiling.. No Tears Please My friend.
Srinivasa
Mr. Srinivas its not my tears... just felt the tears of someone so wrote this poem.. This peom dedicated to everyone who cry for their love.
heyyy..gr8 to c u back J...and a very good one...only i am scared of this meloncholic versions..hey J, next time something to cheer and motivate..know u can and will do it...best wishes.
A great one. I am glad that you dedicated this poem to others.
thats a nice one now. good work!
my friend J is always there 4 inspiration, what say?
In broken-hearted throes of pain,
In stormy seasons when falls the rain,
When light recedes and shadows remain,
The sun someday will shine again.
Anand. :-)
It's not incomplete my dear J with a shree. :-)
U have to click on "read more" to read the entite thingie.
;-)
Jayshree...ur comment was a bombshell of a feedback. Thank u.
If u happen to visit again, U shall see that I have added a proper end to it.
Not leaving a story untold.
Anand. :-)
hey friend, what is the Mr? ramesh? what what what? no "misters" in friendship...then i will start calling u "Maam"
My dear J with a shree...
MY blog may / maynot be mind blowing but the way u think..sure is. ;-)
Infact I think U r mind blowing and quite generous with ur remarks.
Thank u so much. I appreciate it !!
;-)
When u coming out with a new post?
Nice one..
J cheers
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